Monday, September 28, 2020

Draft 1: Summary

The article, “Top Sustainable Technologies in Green Construction”, ConstructionClimateChallenge (2019) claims that green construction “makes buildings more energy-efficient and sustainable”. This article focuses on introducing sustainable construction technologies to enhance green construction. There are three main topics which are materials, applications, and design. Firstly, the technologies under materials: “Cool roofs”, “Electrochromic smart glass”, “Rammed earth bricks”, “Green insulation”, “Biodegradable materials”, and “Sustainable resource sourcing” suggests that it helps in the reduction of absorption of heat and the harmful impacts on the environment by using recycled or sustainable raw materials. Secondly, the applications which are “Water efficiency technologies”, “Sustainable indoor environment technologies”, and “Solar powers”. These applications intend to conserve resources and discourage the use of substances and materials that cannot be renewed while reducing damaging impacts on the environment. The last point is design which includes “Low energy house and Zero-energy building design”, “Self-powered building” and “The use of smart application”. They are designed to conserve and produce energy for the building to generate sufficient power. Green construction not only makes buildings more sustainable by using resource-efficient and environmentally process but also reduces costs for building owners.


Reference:
ConstructionClimateChallenge.com (2019). Top Sustainable Technologies in Green Construction.

Retrieved from:
https://constructionclimatechallenge.com/2019/02/19/top-sustainable-technologies-in-green-construction/

Revised as of 04/10/20 2351hr

1 comment:

  1. Dear Wei Ying,

    I had spotted some grammar mistake in your summary.
    1) Preposition on first line
    2) Third line, second sentence, doesn't flow
    3) Fifth line, it is a plural sentence but 'Suggests' was used and doesn't flow well
    4) The part regarding 'Secondly' has a missing part
    5) The sentence regarding 'The last point' can be improved, by ie. "The last point is about/on design". Will sound better with a preposition word.
    6) Can add a conclusion word to signify it is a summary.

    Hope it helps! :D

    Cheers,
    JY

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